17A Elevator Pitch No.2

What stood out to me as important was change of scenery and having my hair down to look more put together and makeup!
What I changed is that I put on makeup and did my hair!

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  1. Hello! I totally agree with you. I eat like total crap while I’m in college! I’m so stressed out. Sometimes I feel like: How long will I be able to do this? It can be daunting at times. I love your choice of color for your shirt. It really stands out. You got my attention right away. I like how you have your hair down and it’s styled in a way that looks very healthy. Great job!

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  2. Hey Jenny, overall great pitch! I've liked your idea since you brought it up In the beginning of the semester as Gainsville does not have enough healthy places to eat near campus. In reference to the actual pitch, you seemed much more confident this time around and the audience can clearly see your passion for your idea. Keep up the great work!

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